hahaha i can't wait to see what's in that bag.

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well...I am really trying to see if I can see something bad about this...but...well

I could not!!

The first frame: love how you use the border of the panel as part of the storytelling (ceiling of the cellar)

Second frame: nice flow overall of the various perspectives (very cinematic) but here you can see a lot of details in the background, creating a lot of atmosphere.

The xmas-decorum is a cool touch although in reallife I would have put it ON a box and not AGAINST the box.

Third frame: nice touch. Boot stepping on rubbish, establishing how deserted the place was.

Fourth frame: combining the frontal cinematic discovery of the mirror with a nice ass-shot = just perfect.

Last panel: the 'sound' effect of the bag-hitting-floor is just really well done! Also stresses story-elements and atmosphere since it could be read as surprise (made her drop the bag after the discvoery of the mirror) or as adventurous (drop the bag so she can actively uncover the complete mirror by removing the drape)...either way >>> love it!!


The way you drew the bag also makes me want to know (due to the bulging) what is really inside it!!!

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Tried real hard to find something to critique but its all pretty awesome.

Nothing in the pic bugs me except the dimple in her chin in the first frame, thats all i could find that feels a little strange. I think without it the bottom of her face would flow a little better.

Overall great work, this is astounding and im dying to open that bag!!

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great looking page layout and fab inks!

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that official crit you got, i'm sure had he seen the page beforehand he might not have been so concerned with the next shot.

good job, man. but you know how happy we've been with this. i was looking at your very first wonderland pages the other day, shuddering at my own colors, but wow. we've all come so far. i'm excited to see where we go with this conclusion! *high fives*

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Big fat hugs all around! I do have to say that I am very happy I've had the opportunity to work with you over the past 2 years. I enjoy hearing your ideas and even when you let me know I screwed something up. You make my drawin's look purdy! I hope to work with you more in the future. stay golden ponyboy....er girl...ponygirl. get it pony cause you worked on the my little pony stuff.
Honestly though, I've got nothing but love and admiration for you and enjoy every bit of working with you.

ditto ^__^



GUUUUSH!!

XD

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haha yeah definitely ^__^

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